NAVODAYA STUDIO
An Advocate Notice as below has been received. 24 July 2024
It accuses the author of novel BARROZ of plagiarisation.
Reply to the accusation is also given below. 1 August 2024
NOTE - The 'Kappiri Myth' has been referred to as 'Portuguese-Afro-Indian Myth' in the original novel.
This is because, the term 'Kappiri' (transmuted from 'Kafir') is considered derogatory in many parts of the Malabar Coast.
NOTICE
Vizzy George
Anjali Menon
Marks & Rights. Advocates & Attorneys
42/2421, Thaliath Building, St. Benedict Road, Kochi - 682018
®® 91-484-2395676
REGD> WITH A/D Date: 24.07.2024
To
1. Jijo Punnose
20, Palat Sankaran Road, Mahalingapuram, Chennai 600 034;
2. T.K. Rajeev Kumar. TC 36/1056, ‘Karthika’, Enjakkai Junction,
Vallkkadavu, Thiruvananthapuram — 695008
3. Mohanlal. Cine actor and Director
11A, Manohar Avenue, Casa Major Road, Egmore,
Chennai - 600008
4. Antony Perumbavoor. Aashirvad, Pattal Jn.,
Iringole PO, Perumbavoor 683542
Sub:
Notice to cease and desist from infringement of copyright
Sirs,
I am issuing the following notice to you as per the instructions of George Thundiparambil alias T.A. George Augustine having permanent residence at 8/127, Nadavath Nagar P.O Arookutty, Alappuzha District and presently residing at Am Galgenberg 15, 79117 Freiburg, Germany:
George Thundiparambil is a writer, editor and translator by profession and has authored two books in English and has edited and translated novels and various types of books from German to English. In April 2008 George authored and published a novel titled ‘Maya’, utilizing his independent thought, imagination, skill and creativity. It was published by Gauli Publishers, Pondicherry and all the copyrights of the said work are vested in Mr. George. The novel was released by Sri Sashi Tharoor and handed over by the Indian Consul General in Dubai at that time, Sri Venu Rajamony, in Cochin in April 2008.
The theme of the novel authored by George is developed based on a myth prevalent in the Fort Kochi area about a ghost generally referred to as Kappiri Muthappan who eventually became a demigod worshiped in the locality. Kappiri Muthappan is believed to be an African slave who was killed by his Portuguese master for guarding the latter’s treasure before he fled for Portugal. The belief was that the slave’s spirit would guard the treasure till a descendant of the master arrived and received it.
The Kappiri myth and the idea of this character guarding the treasure and waiting for the right heir or heiress is in the public domain and is not copyright-protected. However, George’s utilization and expression of this mythical idea into a storyline is unique in that the eighteen-year-old girl viz. Maya, who brings to life an abstract mythical opposite of Kappiri as the heiress of the treasure and fulfils the very existence of Kappiri, is the only person who can see Kappiri with naked eyes on normal days. The ability to see him, communicate with him and. interact with him, in turn, becomes the key signal for Kappiri to recognize her as the heiress of the treasure he guards. This treatment and expression of the mythical idea is unique to ‘Maya’ and is bestowed with creative skills and is copyright-protected and forms the basis on which the story proceeds.
The novel published by George had a fairly good circulation in Kochi and major cities in India. In late 2016, when George’s mother was ill and he was in Kerala, Mr. Anil Dayanand, a friend of George’s who is an artist and a sculptor approached him for a copy of Maya. He said he talked about George's novel to a friend of his, a film director named T.K. Rajeev Kumar, and that he proposed giving it to another film director Jijo Punnoose for consideration of adaptation of the novel into a film. A copy of the novel was, thereupon, given by George to Anil Dayanand and he was told later that the novel was handed over to T. K. Rajeev Kumar at his residence in Thiruvananthapuram. Thereafter, there was no further information from Anil Dayanand as to whether Rajeev Kumar had handed it over to Jijo Punnoose or whether he had read it or liked it. Mr. George, who resides in Germany most of the time, did not have an opportunity to meet any of the aforesaid people.
But recently, it has come to the notice of Mr. George that a movie is being produced by you with the title ‘Barroz’ and will be ready for release soon. It was a friend of Mr. George who informed him that the theme of the movie is strikingly similar to the novel written by George. Thereupon, Mr. George searched for the details of the movie on various websites and found that there was an absolute violation of the copyright vested in him.
On Wikipedia, it is shown that the movie Barroz is based on a ‘novel’ written by the first among you with the title “Barroz: Guardian of D’ Gama’s Treasure”. Mr. George then searched for the so-called novel and found that there was no such novel available in the market. A further search led George to a webpage devoted to the said novel on the Navodaya Studio website. This page can be accessed from the drop-down Home menu on the start page. A further two webpages on the same site under the Projects and Blogs menus respectively are devoted to ‘Barroz’ the film. The blog is .written by the first among you regarding the evolution of the Malayalam movie ‘Barroz’. On this page, the first among you claims that he first wrote a novel by the name of Barroz in 2017 and then converted it into a screenplay in Malayalam when the other three among you joined the project. To show that the first among you had written a novel first, a few ‘chapters’ were displayed on the novel’s webpage. Each chapter contains only one small page and it is evident that this was an attempt to make people believe that the screenplay is based on your own novel. The aforesaid page further claims that the novel was published by Navodaya Studio, Kakkanad, Kochi as if they are publishers of books. As stated earlier, Mr. George did not find any such book in the market despite a thorough search. One of these webpages further claims that in 2003 the first among you wrote the story of the ghost guarding his master’s treasure in the ‘Portuguese-Afro-Indian myth’ as seen by an adolescent girl and circulated the story among friends by email. It is further claimed that the novel is the revised version of the story and both the home page and the blog refer to the active involvement of the second among you at the time of formation of the story and conversion of the same into a novel.
A reading of the five chapters on the Barroz novel webpage found under the Navodaya Studio website would clearly demonstrate, to an ordinary observer, an absolute similarity in the way the story and the characters were built therein with that of George’s novel. A few similarities (both copyright-protected as well as not copyright-protected) between the two works as picked from only the first five chapters of Barroz the novel are listed below:
i) The creation of a girl character as a counterfigure to the ghost.
ii) Only the girl can see the ghost and converse with him;
iii) The girl is the heiress of the treasure;
iv) The ghost has been waiting for the girl for his liberation or the realization of existence;
v) A major event takes place in the locality where the girl lives; Gama Celebrations with International Conference in Maya and Casino Investors’ Meet in Barroz.
vi) Protests against the event by radical social elements right from the start in both stories.
vii) A physical confrontation between the police and the protesters in both stories;
viii) The crucial role the father of the girl plays in the event (Chief Sponsor of Gama Celebrations & Chief Investor for the Proposed Casino in the Investors’ Meet) in both stories;
ix) Girls in both stories live in colonial bungalows having a conference room where the ghost is a recurring presence;
x) Similarities in the character of the ghost in both the works; a) both are African men striking in appearance; b) both are playful and jovial by nature; c) both are aware of history, politics and
other social issues of the past and the present; d) the movements and the manner in which they occupy the top of the walis, etc., are almost the same;
xi) The ghost’s image is not reflected in a mirror in both works and that is a fact highlighted in both works.
xii) Both novels recall the historical battles on the Indian West Coast between the Dutch and the Portuguese in a similar fashion.
These would show that the first among you has not only lifted the central idea from Maya but also other elements that form the “expression of that idea” as employed in Maya. Other copyright- protected elements like the controversial events, the character of the girl’s father who is very much involved in the event and other details are also used to build the plot and carry forward thenarration. The primary treatment or expression of the Kappiri myth has been copied and employed in Barroz in the same manner as in George’s novel Maya. It is therefore obvious that the script/screenplay developed from the so-called novel of the first among you is a slavish copy and infringes the copyright of George in many aspects. At this juncture, it is once again asserted by George that the novel purportedly written by Jijo Punnose before he wrote the screenplay is suspect. He believes the claim that there existed a novel written by the first among you forming the basis of the screenplay is a smokescreen created to cover up the copyright infringement you have committed. It is obvious that the screenplay said to be written by Jijo Punnose first and corrected and changed by Rajeev Kumar, later on, contains many elements that are copyright-protected and therefore constitute an unauthorized imitation of George’s novel Maya, amounting to infringement of copyright.
Therefore, all of you have violated the copyrights vested in George by making a script / screenplay, slavishly copying out of his novel Maya and by making a cinematographic film based on such script/screenplay. It is understood from the websites Navodayastudio.com, Completeactor.com and other related websites that the script /screenplay is slavishly copied by the first among you and is marginally improvised by the second among you and the cinematographic film based on such script /screenplay is directed by the third among you and produced by the fourth among you. So, all of you are guilty of infringement of copyright vested in my client, George Thundiparambil.
I am, therefore, instructed by Mr. George Thundiparambil to all upon you to cease and desist from further proceeding to release/publish/communicate to the public the movie by the name
‘Barroz’, which infringes his copyright in the novel ‘Maya’, without obtaining a license from him, and that if you attempt to proceed with preparations for the release/publication/communication to the public of the movie without doing so, take notice that appropriate proceedings will be initiated against all of you both in Civil and Criminal Courts.
Yours truly
Vzzy George
Advocate
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PROOF OF CONCEPT
(sic) creative, not technical.




REPLY
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REGISTERED WITH AD
To
Vizzi George. Advocate,
Marks and Rights, Advocates and Attorneys
42/2421, Thalliayathu Building, St Benedict Road,
Kochi, Kerala - 682018
I am instructed by my client Mr. Jijo Punnoose, s/o M.C. Punnoose, residing at Navodaya Studio, Thengode P.O, Kakkanad, Ernakulam from 20, Palattu Sankaran Road,Mahalingapuram Chennai to issue this reply notice for your notice dated 24/7/2024 as follows:-
1. At the outset, I may inform you that my client Mr. Jijo does not know your client Mr. George as a writer, editor or translator by profession as alleged in your notice. Mr. Jijo has never heard about your client’s book “Maya” till he received your notice. On receipt of the notice on doing a web-search on topic ‘De Gama’s Treasure’ Mr. Jijo could come across thousands of strikes that fit the subject. But none that say about this Mr. George or novel ‘Maya’. On repeated search with the term ‘Kappiri myth’, hundreds of webpages that came up had quite a few articles based on the said subject, hundreds of academic studies on the topic, research papers on the myth but nothing on Mr. George or his novel. Mr. Jijo then searched many variations of the said terms including the word 'novel', also searched specifically with the term ‘Thundiparambil & novel Maya’. On such searches there came up citations and webpages on other novels including the famous one by Ponjikkara Raphy, one by Sandra Fernandez, etc. There were countless academic papers and quite a few quotes by historians – for instance Bernard Master, but nothing on Thundiparambil or Maya. Finally, there my client saw a single line quoted in the webpage https://www.thenewsminute.com/features/african-slaves-and-spirit-kappiri-muthappan-kochis-culture-under-portuguese-dutch-rule-44881 by journalist Haritha John wherein in a single line it is stated that
“In George Thundiparambil’s English novel Maya, a kappiri or slave of African origin is the protagonist who narrates a 500-year history to a girl he meets at Fort Kochi in contemporary Kerala”.
But it is interesting to note that Mr. Jijo also made enquiries in the eminent book stalls, online sites and even E- books to purchase or to read your client’s alleged book “Maya”. Your client Mr. George had indeed written a novel ‘Maya’ (2008), the book so insignificant that it has been left unmentioned anywhere. Further about the stated privileges associated with the book’s release, I am informed that even that release did not enlighten the public about the existence of the book.
2. In respect of the allegation in para 2 in page 2 of the notice, in the next paragraph it is specifically admitted that the Kappiri Myth and the idea of this character guarding the treasure and waiting for right heir or heiress is in the public domain and it is not copyright protected. Mr. Jijo does not know whether your client Mr. George has developed anything based on any myth as alleged. However your contention that the treatment and expression of the mythical idea is unique to Maya and is bestowed with creative skills and is copyright protected and forms the basis on which the story proceeds is not correct and hence denied. It is settled law that there can be no copyright in an idea, subject matter, themes, plots, or legendary facts which has already been written, displayed by other famous authors before your alleged book, hence your client Mr. George cannot claim any uniqueness in the alleged book. It can be seen that from the advent of English novels in the 16th century, a child meeting an elderly ghost is an oft-repeated theme. The works of Oscar Wilde (1887), Ben Stahl (1965), Mary Hahn (1986), Manoj Shyamalan (1999), Sudhanshu Dube (2008) and Hanna Alkaf (2020) are the most prominent ones where a child befriends an elderly ghost - three among them depicting a teenage girl. Even Oscar Wilde, if he were today, would not claim copyright on the others just because the plots in every one that was written after his, in this particular aspect, resembles his original. Hence the uniqueness alleged by Mr. George in his Novel “Maya” is not copyright protected.
3. In respect of allegation of the publishing and circulation of your client’s book in Kochi or major cities in India, as stated earlier Mr. Jijo made enquiries and not even a single book stall in Kochi is aware of such a novel or about the author. Mr. Jijo has no knowledge of the purported incident your client has had with one Mr. Anil Dayanand handing over the novel ‘Maya’ to Mr. Rajeevkumar - an associate of my client for a few projects other than this, as claimed. My client Jijo has never heard of Anil Dayanand either from Rajeevkumar or from anybody else. No such book has ever been handed over to my client.
4. In respect of allegation in para 3 about the Wikipedia search, I am informing you that my client Mr. Jijo is a reputed Director, Writer, authority in 3D Moviemaking and his Movie My Dear Kuttichathan 3D (1984) is considered as one of the best 3D films made, and by God's Grace the movie has achieved an iconic status in the last 4 decades. He is always in search of making films like Kuttichathan with children’s theme. It was one such sparks in the year 2003 that revived the Portuguese-Afro-Asian Myth (kept shelved from 1982) as noted in the preface of the novel Barroz, Guardian of D’Gama’s Treasure. Mr. Jijo has written the novel not for any public sale but for the passion of making good films which is equally enjoyable for adults and for the children. As stated in the preface of the book, "the Portuguese-Afro-Indian Myth outlined here was just one among the many that were set aside when selecting the Kuttichathan Myth to narrate a children's fantasy. Mr. Jijo did revisit the subject in 2003 when he and Mr. Jude Attippetty was walking along Fort Kochi waterfront. Mr. Jude Attippetty pointed out a fascinating sight. Some distance from the boat jetty, there was a man sitting atop a bollard. That was when it occurred to Mr. Jijo that it could be that ghost guarding his master's treasure in the famous Portuguese-Afro-Indian myth / Kappiri Myth (sic), as seen by an adolescent girl (since Mr. Jude started visualising it as seen by his own daughter). My client Mr. Jijo wrote the story and circulated it among a few friends through email. At that time, Kochi was in the excitement of the Global Investor's Meet 2003. Accordingly Mr. Jijo placed the story in Goa during a casino investors' meet, the casino is to come up at the very spot where the ghost was guarding the buried treasure. Rajeevkumar and others pointed out the similarity of the new story with that of Mr. Jijo ’s earlier film My Dear Kuttichathan 3D , the fact that both are about a girl child befriending a treasure guarding spirit. Merely that, the child in the Kuttichatan myth had become an adolescent now in the Portuguese-Afro-Indian myth".
5. From the year 2003, starting with Jude Attippetty (Program Controller - Amrita TV/ Manorama TV), other creative minds viz; Geo Kuttappan (Producer), Shaji N Karun (Cinematographer, Director), Sureshkanthan (Fairground Conceiver), Pratap Pothen (Actor, Director), Prof. Josy Joseph (Scholar in Malayalam language & Media Studies), K. Sheker (Art Director), Ashwini Kaul (Cinematographer), Prakash Moorthy (Animator, tutor - NID), RK (Illustrator), Rajesh Abraham (Director), A.M. Nazeer (TV Serial Director), Jensen Zacharia (Program Director - Shalom TV), Shelton Pinheiro (Creative Director - STARK), Althaf Hussein (AD), Karun Josy (AD) with occasional written suggestions had contributed to the story, as new ideas came upon them. Most of these people were closely associated with Mr. Jijo for decades. As noted in the blog https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-malayalam-version , the conversation, communications and discussions between the author and his colleagues that occurred sporadically, was written down as a novel in 2017 and got published in 2018 when the prospect of making a film on the subject emerged. As noted in the blog, it was at the insistence of Producer Swapna David the novel was printed. Meant as a viable conduit to International Studios for a Global Production in English and Hispanic languages done in India, the printed novel was sent out along with the project proposal to film investors in U.K and L.A and also to rope in a famous actor - Will Smith/ Morgan Freeman/ Eddie Murphy/ Denzel Washington or Idris Elba to play the lead role. This should be considered as the Production Design of the film Barroz, Guardian of D’Gama’s Treasure. The Production Design has been outlined in webpage https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-proposed-english-version
6. As noted in the blog, resource personnel were approached to help with the story. One of them was Dr. C.J. John (renowned Psychiatrist, Media Advisor) known to Mr. Jijo from the year 1999 in conferences for propagating among youngsters the noble concept of ‘value-based-filmmaking’. He helped my client to develop the personality and character traits of the girl child befriending the ghost. The other is Dr. Edward A Edezhath, Professor in English at St. Alberts and an authority on the said myth, now residing in California, who from year 2000 till year 2009 was an associate of Mr. Jijo in the organization JesusYouth International, HQ Kochi, to propagate among talented youngsters the ideal of ‘moral-filmmaking’. Subsequently, Story Doctors were also contacted by my client to prepare a screen narrative befitting an International film. Mr. John Paul (Renowned veteran script writer), and Mr. Suraj Varma (Script writing academician & tutor) wrote out corrections to my client for the story narrative.
7. As noted in the webpage https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-proposed-english-version, a script was developed out of the published novel. It had variations from the novel. The screen narrative’s variations, the changes and the thought processes of how the variations came to be have been detailed in blog https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-malayalam-version
8. Also outlined in the blog is the dynamics of how, in mid-2018 a Malayalam language version (with the Negroid ghost character getting changed to a Malabari ghost character) was made for Mr. Mohanlal to direct the malayalam movie. Of how the Corona Lockdown caused the project to be shelved in the year 2021. Of how the Director Mohanlal and the Producer Antony Perumbavoor with Mr. Jijo ’s consent and without Mr. Jijo's participation were forced to write a new story that could be filmed amidst corona shooting restrictions. Mr. Mohanlal's film Barroz's story or screenplay, though it may be based on the Kappiri Myth, is not authored by my client. Due to the reason that the story has been changed, my client Mr. Jijo intends to produce the original script in English and Hispanic with a Black Hollywood actor. So the contrary allegations are hereby denied.
9. In respect of the allegations of showing only five chapters of the novel in the website, I am informed that it is the usual practice of the filmmakers and writers in the field of making movies to always give a space for the people to anxiously wait for the rest. As stated earlier, the novel has been written and published not for sale to the public, but for making a renowned international movie. Further, the similarities pointed out by you have nothing to do with the uniqueness alleged by your client. My client Mr. Jijo has not lifted any idea or any elements or controversial events or the character of the girl’s father or the expression of Kapiri Myth as alleged in your notice since Mr. Jijo or any of his associate in this project, I understand, has never seen or read your client’s book till today. Mr. Jijo does not desire to read it in future, either.
10. Against the said allegations, kindly note that in 6 of most prominent works among such child meets elderly ghost - by Oscar Wilde, Ben Stahl, Mary Hahn, Manoj Shyamalan, Sudhanshu Dube and Hanna Alkaf, only the child can see the ghost and communicate with him. Even in Mr. Jijo ’s movie My Dear Kuttichathan 3D (1984), Mr. Jijo has used the idea that only the young protagonists, primarily the heroine girl child, can see the ghost and communicate with the ghost. Mr. Jijo would not claim it as unique, and I request you to inform Mr. George your client who claims as the author of novel Maya (2008), that he too should not claim copyright on a centuries-old idea. Nothing has been brought out by your client Mr. George to show that substantial and material similarities were taken by my client Mr. Jijo for any actionable claim. In respect of the other contention that the ghost’s image is not reflected in a mirror in both works and that is a fact highlighted in both works, the same is not an invention done by your client Mr. George or my client Mr. Jijo. It is very old idea as old as Bramstoker’s Novel Dracula (1897). Even in Mr. Jijo ’s movie in the year 1984 - movie My Dear Kuttichathan 3D, Kuttichathan’s reflection is not seen when the girl - heroine Lakshmi, turns the mirror towards the spirit.
11. My client Mr. Jijo refutes the point about the creation of the girl character in his novel is a counter figure to the ghost. In Mr. Jijo's novel Barroz, neither the girl is the heiress nor does she ‘liberate’ the ghost. She does not ‘bring to life an abstract mythical opposite of Kappiri’ or the Kappiri himself. If the said elements, as claimed by your client, is the premise that forms the basis on which your client’s story proceeds, my client states that your client is terribly mistaken in finding similarity with the novel Barroz. In Mr. Jijo ’s novel, the girl does not go out to prove the ghost’s existence. Nor is the girl out to vindicate the historical wrongs done to the ghost. Mr. Jijo’s novel is a psychological child fantasy. It is about a girl with character deformities, under the constant supervision of a doctor (psychiatrist) engaged by her father. She hears about the myth from a loud-mouthed boy who is of Kappiri Muthappan’s lineage, and imagines herself to be the heiress since her mother is a Portuguese national. The ghost is only a figment of her imagination. The aged ghost, the lonely girl fantasizes as becoming her playmate.
12. As in the work of the author Sudhamshu Dube where the small boy drives the old ghost crazy with his antics, in Mr. Jijo ’s novel the prankish girl spooks the rascally old man (ghost) and they both join to have riotous fun, frolic and adventure. In fact, it is a reboot of Mr. Jijo’s earlier film My Dear Kuttichathan 3D. The present novel Barroz is only a variation to the fantasy and adventure of the film My Dear Kuttichathan 3D where the children come to have fun. In respect of the further similarities pointed out, I am informing you that at least 20 percent of the movies released in the last ten years in India do depict agitation and protests by activists against the governing authorities, industrial enterprises, international conglomerates or organizers of public events. This is by virtue of the fact that everyday public protests occur in India, and have become prevalent against any sort of function, event or celebration. Hence this similarity of protest against the event by radical social elements, physical confrontation between the police and the protesters are all common and which cannot be claimed as unique by anybody to make it actionable under the Copyright Act.
13. In respect of the further similarities alleged about the major event takes place in the locality where the girl lives - viz; Gama Celebrations with International Conference in Maya and Casino Investors’ Meet in Barroz. The crucial role the father of the girl plays in the event (Chief Sponsor of Gama Celebrations & Chief Investor for the Proposed Casino in the Investors’ Meet) in both stories, it is submitted that - Ron Madhav, the father of the girl Teresa in Mr. Jijo’s novel, is not the chief investor of the Casino Investor’s meet. Ron Madhav is in Goa to seek treatment (by psychiatrist Kovoor) for his daughter Teresa of her behavioral problems and in the process to win back his estranged wife Isabella, a Portuguese physician working with International Medicare in Goa. It is the girl’s imagination that her father would get hold of the D’Gama Mansion so that she could continue her frolic with the aged black ghost. Your client Mr. George is purposefully twisting my client Mr. Jijo’s story to fit a nefarious design since the father (name and vocation not known) of the girl (Maya, I presume) in your client's story seems to be sponsoring some sort of Gama celebration in Kochi. Your client seems to be twisting facts very hard to establish a connection between his historical Vasco De Gama who is the master of the black slave in his novel ‘Maya’ set in 16th Century Kochi, and that of my client’s Cristavio D’Gama - master of servant Barroz (both Cristavio & Barroz imaginary characters), set in 18th Century Goa. As to the single line in a solitary webpage your client's novel merit - 'the ghost narrating a 500-year history to a girl', it is being made clear here that my client Mr. Jijo has no private axe to grind in rewriting maritime history, nor Mr. Jijo seeks attention by tarnishing exploration narratives of famous/ infamous conquistadors . As a creative person, his only intention is to entertain, and he has used the characters entirely different from your client's for that singular purpose.
14. As for the allegation iv) The ghost has been waiting for the girl for his liberation or the realization of existence as a similarity in both the works, it is reminded that 'A treasure-guarding-servant-ghost waiting for the heir' is the very essence of the Kappiri Myth, which you admit as one that is not copyright protected. So the contradictory claim of 'the waiting ghost' as a startling similarity, is rather bizarre.
On further allegation of similarities of the character of ghost in both works, it is informed to you that both novels are from a common idea based on the copyright-free Kappiri Myth.
15. The black ghost character Barroz in Mr. Jijo’s novel is of course playful and jovial. The ghost trips down the minister to fall, switches between flower on a lady’s hair and pen in a gentleman’s pocket. He punctures the municipal commissioner’s car tires, booby-traps the hall chandler to crash down, etc. My client doesn't know whether your client's ghost indulges in such antics since Mr. Jijo hasn't read your client's novel. But please inform your client Mr. George that the pranks by ghost Barroz are in fact actually done by the adolescent girl with a mental condition, and like all poltergeist activity in real life, the troubled teenager attributes it to a ghost of her imagination. Mr. Jijo’s other fantasy main characters in his ghost stories - Kuttichathan, Thiruvazhithan https://www.navodayastudio.com/_files/ugd/8a582f_f005bd4031f644d9a653faa1460cd3ee.pdf , etc. are also playful and jovial. The main ghost characters in the novels/ works - The Canterville Ghost, Wait till Heaven comes and The Sixth Sense - all written long before your client's novel - are elderly, funny, playful and jovial when befriending the child in the story. This is one of the creative devices every writer would deploy to make his or her narrative interesting.
16. This idea of joviality is not limited to anyone’s unique imagination. Further, if your client Mr. George’s African Ghost is aware of history, politics and other social issues, nowhere in Mr. Jijo's novel the character Barroz is aware of history, politics or social issues. Mr. Jijo’s novel being merely fun and fantasy, the ghost character is imaginary. The old black simpleton, though from Kappiri Myth, does not carry any historical baggage - nowhere in my client’s novel. This is ample proof in the very words of your client that he is barking up a wrong tree.
17. The movements and manner in which character Barroz occupy the top of the walls, etc. are identical to Mr. Jijo’s own character Kuttichathan in the film My Dear Kuttichathan 3D (1984). Mr. Jijo has only repeated the instance of girl Teressa seeing Barroz seated on wall, from that of My Dear Kuttichathan 3D where young girl Lakshmi sees Kuttichathan seated on the walls and the ceiling.
18. On further allegation that the girls in both stories live in colonial bungalows having a conference room where the ghost is a recurring presence. The Kappiri Myth, being colonial in times, any modern story-setting based on the myth is bound to have colonial architecture in its narrative. This ought to be true for your client’s story-setting which as he says happens in Fort Kochi where Heritage Festivals and Biennales do take place today. This is also true for my client’s novel Barroz set in Goa which, like Fort Kochi, has a colonial colony called Fountainhas where conferences and carnivals take place today. Given these facts, the question of how the idea can be solely and uniquely limited to your client’s creative imagination would baffle anybody. Yet, the crucial variation is in the Museum/ Library premise the girl in Mr. Jijo’s novel resides. It is a medieval castle, termed D’Gama Mansion. It is not a bungalow, as claimed by you in Mr. George's story, where girl character happens to residence. It is a far cry from a Fort Kochi bungalow which your client seeks to find similarity with. In Mr. Jijo’s novel, the adventure of the girl is associated with the missing ear ring of Lady Isabella D’Gama at the Mansion, a Museum. And coming to ghostly presence in Mansions ... one need only to look at stories by Enid Blyton (1897 - 1968). Most among the hundreds of her adventure settings for children are in Old Mansions, Abandoned Forts, Castles and Palaces - the sites of buried fortunes and family heirlooms where strange incidents, ghostly presence and paranormal occurrences happen. The places would have events such as Carnivals, Museum inaugurations, Country fairs, Celebrity visits, etc. taking place during period of the story narrative. This scenario and settings have been so widely accepted, many children’s stories and films have had this type of ominous architectural settings and public events for children’s adventure. One famous example to this is film Home Alone (1990). My client has been influenced by these works. Incidentally, the film My Dear Kuttichathan 3D (1984) also has an old collector’s bungalow where the ghost is a recurring presence.
19. There are a number of works of literature which the ideas identical to what your client claim as unique have been published. They date back to two centuries.
20. If your client Mr. George is genuinely of literary credentials as claimed, he would definitely have been aware of the above mentioned works and been influenced by these works which men and women of literature consider as great accomplishments. Whatever be the case, my client Mr. Jijo admits that he has been influenced by the above mentioned works. If Mr. Jijo needs to have adopted ideas, then he could have taken it from the famous works, and not from an obscure novel - a novel unaware to my client, or to the world at large.
21. The final similarity alleged, both novels recall the historical battles on the Indian West Coast between the Dutch and the Portuguese in a similar fashion, is a blatant lie. While it is a historical fact that battles did take place between Dutch and the Portuguese during the 16th and 17th centuries on the Malabar Coast, and those battles’ narratives have been chronicled and even canvas painted and museum-displayed for their significance, there simply cannot be any similarity of what my client has wrote in the solitary battle narrative at the Barroz novel’s preamble. But if your client, as he claims, has set his ‘historical battles’ of his novel Maya in Kochi or anywhere other than Goa, it cannot be a combined Maratha - Dutch attack on the Portuguese fort. It cannot be a Portuguese evacuation from a walled fortified city down towards the galleons anchored alongside the fort. This can happen only in Goa where Mr. Jijo has set his narrative. This narrative is totally fictitious and has originated in Mr. Jijo’s mind. Mr. George, after having read the single battle narrative in Mr. Jijo’s novel, ought be knowing fully well that he himself could not have written anything of that sort.
22. When the story was written in a particular mode of narration by developing the idea as an expression with the figment of his imagination it cannot be said that the story itself is an idea. When an idea is developed as a story it is an imaginary work of that particular person who makes the story, in such case it becomes the manifestation of his own imagination and it cannot be treated as a mere idea. Where the theme is the same but is presented and treated differently the subsequent work becomes a completely new work and no question of violation of copyright arises. Using the above yardstick, it can be seen that your client has misrepresented facts to you and also my client suspects this is your client’s attempt to obtain unlawful gain at the eve of the release of a movie since the producers will be tend to avoid unnecessary issues in the last moment. Or, a ruse to create controversy in public to revive his defunct novel. Even as early as 2019, the news of film Barroz - Guardian of D'Gama's Treasure launch was reported in most International Media because with an International cast - Spanish/ Portuguese/ African/ American actors, was then announced. For the last two years it is a most publicised news in the local media that due to Corona Lockdown and resultant film production restrictions the cast has been changed and the story of Barroz has been replaced. Those webpages still exist in the internet domain. Your client could not have failed to see them whichever part of the world he was residing in. Your client’s notice is a groundless threat of legal proceedings. The grounds alleged in your notice is not an infringement of copyright. My client’s act is a fair dealing of a myth and hence advise your client not to proceed with any proceedings to desist the release of the movie “Barroz” and my client is not bound to obtain any license from your client. Your client caused to issue this notice without any reasonable or probable cause and vexatiously. If any proceedings is initiated by your client, your client is liable for the damages and for compensatory cost for the same. For further clarity I am sending my client's Novel Barroz*, Guardian of D’Gama’s Treasure (English) printed in year 2018 to you along with this reply notice.
Hence I hereby call upon you to advise your client not to initiate any illegal proceedings based on Copyright infringement alleged and disregarding the same if your client proceeds, your client will be doing at his own risk and cost.
Dated this the 1st day of August 2024
Advocate for Mr. Jijo
* The Novel https://www.navodayastudio.com/barroz-novel , which along with the detailed webpages
https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-proposed-english-version and
https://www.navodayastudio.com/film-barroz-malayalam-version , the accuser asserts -
purportedly written, nonexistent, suspect ... an elaborate smokescreen created only to cover up the copyright infringement.

[Alas! Such narrow-focused, jaundiced humans,
when self-centered, pompous we become !!]
Clarifications added
by Jijo, blog 15 August to 08 September 2024
https://www.navodayastudio.com/scripting-thoughtprocess

The first five chapters of the novel given (July 2018) on webpage https://www.navodayastudio.com/barroz-novel
balance chapters added below
on 08 September 2024

CHAPTER 6.
Office room. D'Gama Mansions Hotel.
An urgent security review meeting is called.
Rajat Singh IPS, the Inspector General of Goa Police, has conducted numerous security reviews in this room before. Those were the times when threat to the GIBO conference was minimal. Now that a serious breach has happened, it is a vexed IG who barges into the room after having borne the brunt of the Chief Minister's wrath. Not to mention the fleecing his department is receiving at the hands of the media.
While walking to his table, Rajat Singh was doing a recollection of what had occurred in the past 72 hours. The first indication of trouble was a tampering reported in the hotel kitchen. That was a crude attempt at poisoning. It pointed to an inside job. Hence he had ordered for the security cameras. But that wouldn't stop the culprit/s who further pestered the guests with minor pranks. 'How many of their agents have these protesters planted inside his security cordon?' - wondered the IG. 'Who thought that the FM slipping from his chair would snowball into this? ... After all, a minor mishap
"Mishap? No, sir ... sorry to contradict my own initial assessment ..."
DIG Abida Rokfar, with her gloved hand plus an apologetic but grave disposition, slaps down a bunch of marbles on the meeting table. The khaki uniforms around the table stiffen further. There is absolute silence as the marbles roll around the table.
"One of those was found under the leg of the FM's chair ... the rest, what constables - Donna and Naik, were pelted with".
Inspector Sunder, makes an entry in haste. He drops a bunch a computer peripherals and files on the table.
"Sir, the lab reports are here ... No abnormal activity is noted by the cameras ..."
DIG Abida Rokfar asks
"Are you sure?"
CI Sunder answers
"Madam, we work on a fairly high frequency rotation ... 24 hour cycle. I've had the last cycle reviewed again and again"
This last information catches the attention of a bespectacled man seated among the members at the table
There you see Dr. Kovoor, Head of Psychology at the University of Colombo. The bespectacled doctor bows.
"Aliens, Bhoot, Bermuda triangle syndrome? Well, Interesting theses! Hmmm .... however titillating they are, I am sorry to say that this particular case of abnormal occurrences - the mysterious happenings,- fit the classic yet mundane behavioral pattern exhibited by a solitary adolescent mind craving for attention".
To emphasize his point, Dr. Kovoor turns to Rajat Singh and says
" ... anomalistic psychology, the garden variety; sir"
Dr. Kovoor realizes that the IG also was in a state of denial like the rest of his audience. Hence he says
"Allow me to demonstrate ..."
and reaches across the table. He picks up ... the hotel's guest register lying on the table.
He leafes through the book and narrows down his search to Suite Room # 2003: Ron Madhav (38) and Theresa Madhav (13).
Dr. Kovoor -
"Who is this girl? Can somebody get me her details ...?"
From the expression on the face of the DIG - Abida Rokfar, Dr. Kovoor deduces that his request will not be met.
So he turns to CI Sunder and says -
"Meanwhile sir, your security camera images-relate to the moments the mishap took place. Right? ... Surely, if my deduction is correct, they can provide no clue. Please get me the archived footages 48 hours prior to those mishaps. I may be able to show you the prankster at work."
The frown on CI Sunder's brow is sufficient for Dr. Kovoor to deduct further that this request also will not be complied with. He turns to the top brass at the table to make a concession.
"Sir, I do agree though, that the prankster's next strike shall be in i two days time. Friday, to be precise. That's the day the bidding is scheduled for, isn't it?"
Everybody at the table is startled. Was it the church bell striking twelve noon, or was it Kovoor's words sinking-in, that caused the jolt? It is a difficult question to answer.
Chapter 7.
Theresa, with her new elderly friend Barroz the ghost, was sitting on the mansion's parapet wall, whistling heavenwards, when a few urgent tugs on the blue shawl around her neck makes her look down. It is her young friend Chotta Barroz. The boy points to what could be the prelude to a pitched battle on the street, and rushes towards the commotion.
"Charge!" a command resounds on the streets.
Anti-casino demonstrators clash furiously with the advancing police force. There occurs a lathi charge (baton charge). The free for all situation is brought into control only when DIG Abida Rokfar arrive at the scene. But by then, the lady heading the protest, Ms. Firebrand, is down with a broken shoulder. It's our boy Chotta who is assisting the injured woman. And suddenly Theresa sees a white lady in physician's garb come to help. She, a 35 year old woman of Iberian origin, apparently a doctor working in Goa for a foreign mission, is seen counseling Ms. Firebrand to give-up her obstinacy. Other protesters, still shouting, thwart all attempts at pacification. Altercations ensue when Ms. Abida orders Ms. Firebrand loaded onto an ambulance. That ambulance, come screeching to a halt, has Christian Charity International logo on it - the same, worn by the lady doctor on her uniform.
Theresa, still sitting on the parapet, is watching. While lifting the injured woman up, as if in a plea for help, Chotta Barroz suddenly looks in Theresa's direction. The lady doctor, also helping the injured woman onto the stretcher, follows the boy's gaze ... and sees Theresa. For a moment their eyes lock. Something unsettles Theresa. As if in a trance, she gets down from the parapet. Before she could move forward, she hears Black Pa Barroz behind her ... continue his whistling, oblivious of the grave happenings occurring before them.
An irritated Theresa speaks her mind -
"I thought you worked for that anti-casino bunch over there. You ought to be helping them ... deflating those police car tires ....at the least"
Black Pa Barroz sat up to take notice.
"Look here my lady, we treasure guarding. ghosts care two hooting whistles for traditionalists and heritage activists. Black Pa Barroz has nothing against casinos or gambling either. I just dissuade anybody trying to grab my master's mansion or his treasure ... your treasure! And, till today, I have not deterred from my task".
Theresa, incredulous,
"My Treasure? What the hell are you talking about! How could your master's treasure be mine?"
Barroz looks in the direction of the boy (or is it the lady doctor?) and gives an exaggerated shrug ... a shrug, that could mean anything. Barroz continues
"Believe me, my child ... you are -a direct descendant of my master D'Gama and my mistress Isabelle ... just as the boy Chotta Barroz is one of mine"
Theresa seems startled. She looks back and forth between the two Barrozs in an attempt to digest what she has heard. Theresa exhales slowly -
"Oh, now I get it Chotta did tell me of the treasure ... that, he once attempted to get a wee bit of it ... by 'invoking Black Pa Barroz - his great, great, great grandpa ... when at home one day, his family was very hungry"
Barroz nods understandingly, becomes emotional.
"I wouldn't allow it ... not even a small pearl, the smallest of the gems, to be parted with ... even when I see my children, grandchildren, grandchildren's grandchildren, ... go hungry"
Theresa - "Why"
Barroz's eyes water, his voice chokes.
"Because, that is the code ... the code of trust, imposed on all treasure guarding ghosts"
He sobs. Down on his knees, now weeping, Barroz pleads.
"My Lady, Theresa my child, ... why don't you take your treasure, please, please! ... so that I am relieved of my duty. Allow me to depart".
Theresa watches in silence as Barroz folds his hands in prayer
"Please, Lady. please take your treasure. P-L-E-A-S-E!"
Theresa, shouldering a grave burden, nods her head vehemently, in affirmation.
"Okay!"
Chapter 8.
A camera monitor at the hotel's security control room displays the stairwell into D'Gama Mansion's basement. Theresa enters and stops at edge of the camera field. She waits. With his cap, Barroz covers the lens of the security camera mounted on the wall. The monitor goes blank. The next time it comes on, Theresa has already crossed into the the basement.
Black Pa Barroz takes Theresa down along a stairway through cavernous paths to show her the treasure. The giant doors to those cellars open! The chambers are full of exotic.-artifacts - most of, which we see in the huge D'Gama family painting displayed in the library of the mansion. Theresa opens up•Isabelle's priceless ornament collection. From among the ornaments she picks up the missing pair of Lady Isabelle's earring. ... the matching pair to the one displayed within the glass case in the mansion's library. Now after almost 4 centuries of search, it is Theresa who has discovered the missing pair!
Then she moves on. With great fascination she tastes the pickled goodies that have been waiting for her. But she doesn't get to see much inside the vat jars holding the vintage wines.
"Black Pa, why are these empty?"
Upon that, Barroz suddenly remembers great fabulous things beyond, and Theresa along.
"I asked you a question ... why are these wine jars empty?' a persistent Theresa won't let go.
Suddenly, from the cellar shelves, dolls belonging to Theresse De'Gama, start chuckling and chattering ...
"He emptied them ... drank them neat ... "
Barroz rushes to them "Shh shhh" but, he has a tough time trying to shut their mouths. For, it was actually Would-U (the voodoo doll) become envious of Barroz's new-found centre of attention, who was making the dolls chatter. Theresa wags her finger -
"Aha! So, ... that much for the treasure guarding ghost's code of trust "
Theresa's accusation makes the ghost cringe. He hides in one of those empty wine jars. His head then emerges to offer excuses -
"Ahem, my dear ... cross my heart; I was ablc to resist temptation for the first hundred years ... But, during the next 250 .... 246 to be exact, ... how can an old man resist ... however much loyal he is !!" explains a peevish ghost. "Oh, if only these could have been those Jamaican rum kegs ...!" He smacks his lips longingly
Theresa spews out full venom ...
"A** H***! ... you got drunk on duty, ... and somebody looted my treasure!! " she takes out the earring from her gown pocket "Now I know, how the other pair to this landed up in that glass case"
Along with the piece of ornament, Theresa has also pulled out from her pocket Chotta Barroz's tattered cloth purse, which the boy had handed her for safekeeping. Noticing that, and realising that at the moment Chotta would be in badly need of that, she says hoarsely ...
"Oh my God! I have to give this back to Chotta ... this was why he was staring at me ..."
Theresa rushes back to the stairs, with Barroz frantically following her shouting
"Careful dear, you can lose your way! Be warned, six looters ... a thurki prince, gora sahib morgan, captain cheeni, one malbari jeweler, ... even Long Ben and Black Heart lost their lives here, looking for the way out!!
Theresa crosses him on the stairway again ... and, again! Barroz, with entreaties, keeps appearing and re-appearing (partial transformations into the characters who he mimes) from the steps immediately above her, blocking her path. In anger, Theressa shouts "Espiritu Maligno, ;Particle At least this time, since the ghost is floored by the outburst, the spell seemingly worked. Sitting on,the stairs Barroz laments
"Lord, I hope none of those six are around here"

Chapter 9.
With his purse extended in her hand, Theresa steps forward at the parapet wall where she last parted with Chotta Barroz. The boy, with a hand apparently bruised during the scuffle between the police and the protesters, takes it from Theresa. While she wraps his bruise with her shawl, he urges her to come along to the Christian Charity Hospital.
Chotta is pedaling furiously his cycle. Theresa riding pillion behind him. After sometime she notices a whistling following besides her. It is Barroz; running alongside panting and whistling. She mimes his actions in ridicule,,and tosses her head (G, Cons0 40 "Get Lost" mouthing silently. Despite her silent shouts of "Go Away" admonitions, he is still following to make amends.
By the time they reach the hospital, Barroz has made himself scarce. Hurried activity is taking place inside the hospital casualty. Dr. Isabella (that is what her name tag says) - an orthopedic surgeon, had just finished patching up Ms. Firebrand and group, when Chotta Barroz and Theresa make their entry. While attending to the boy Chotta's bruises, with exasperation the doctor comments
"Broken bones, nothing but broken bones today ... yours is the first bruise!"
Then she notices Theresa. Dr. Isabella gives Theresa a disapproving look over ... meaning, 'What has this girl of aristocratic origin doing with slum dwellers?' But, the slum dwelling boy's praises for Theresa, soon removes the doctor's disinclination. And Theresa, spurred by a vociferous laudation from a devoted Chotta, is suddenly all sugar and honey. Helping in minor chores, she prances around Dr. Isabella. Certain things, which Theressa talks about herself, make Isabella lose concentration. Beyond a point, the lady doctor is giving full attention to this strange girl who, along with a boy from the slums, had just walked into her casualty .... Dr. Isabella, for no apparent reason, becomes emotional and hugs Theresa!
Theresa, if ever she is surprised, has no time to think about the lady's affectionate gesture. For, beyond Isabella's hugging arms, she suddenly sees Black Pa Barroz hiding under the table and watching every movement.
He silently instructs her with action "Hug her, hug her back ... tightly"
Theresa - . "What are you doing here? ... Why are you hiding?" Theresa whispers, almost silently mouthing the words, lest Isabella hear her.
Barroz, with silent actions -"Black Pa do not want Dr. Isabelle to see him" Barroz gesticulates ... his action conveying that he should stay out of the lady doctor's vision.
Theresa -
"See you? ... How can she see you?" His priority is not in clearing her doubts, but to urge her into an urgently needed action "Hug her, QUICK! hug her ... tight. QUICK!" he gesticulates again.
At this point, Dr. Isabella becomes conscious of Theresa 'talking behind her back'. When Isabella turns around, Barroz disappears. Suspicious and perturbed, Isabella releases Theresa, compose herself, and gets up.
Outside, later, Barroz reappears to voice his disappointment to Theresa
"That was a golden opportunity, lost"
Barroz shakes his head. But Theresa is only interested to know more of that something, which had surprised her ... that, Dr. Isabella also could see Black Pa Barroz.
"How can that be possible Black Pa? you told me that only a descendant from De'Gama can see you! ... You'tol,d me only I can see you!"
Barroz gives his characteristic shrug - the shrug that could mean anything.
It would suffice to state that the old ghost and the young girl has reconciled after their second fall out.
Chapter 10.
Now that she has officially taken charge of her treasure, to wreck the investor's meet, Theresa becomes a willing and enthusiastic accomplice to Barroz the Ghost.
On friday, the day of the bidding, a close contest was building up between the potential buyers.
Just as the process was reaching a nail-biting climax, the huge cut-glass chandelier suspended high above in the hall comes crashing down - in full glory, onto the bidding table! Pandemonium.
The casino plans are in limbo.
Following that big bang, there is fire and fury in the security room when sensors indicate a human activity in the attic above conference hall. Realising that the perceived activity is not by any chance 'paranormal', CI Sunder shouts for action. With him an army of security guards rush up the stairs towards the attic.
What is happening to our two friends, while the tumultuous scenes unfold?
Well; it was the two rascals who had rigged the chandler's suspension bolts even two days before the bidding.
And it is Theresa who has just triggered the fall. Where is Barroz meanwhile?
While the bidding process was on, Barroz had played the red herring lo lure away security minions.
But Dr. Kovoor, not distracted by the pranksters' diversions, almost catches Theresa in the act.
He is by her side to pull her out of the path of the security battalion ... as Inspector Sunder and group rush past them ... up the stairs, towards the scene of the crime.

Chapter 11.
In her hotel room, Suite # 2003, Theresa is being interrogated by Dr. Kovoor.
Dr. Kovoor lights his pipe. He puts down the pipe and brings out the clinching evidence for the chandelier's collapse - a picture he had taken on his cellphone.
"My child, what were you doing in the attic above the chandelier two days ago, and again there, now, just before the crash?"
With no way to escape, Theresa is forced to confide to him about Black Ghost Barroz and his mission to guard the treasure. She had merely helped him for a cause she considers just. Yes, she spills every one of Barroz's deeds which he had told her. The last act of triggering, she owns up.
Then Dr. Kovoor comes out with a record of her past mischiefs at the Kodai boarding school and it reads exactly like 'Barroz the Ghost in Kodai'!!
Faeces in the mess soup.
Haunting the dormitory with the biology class skeleton.
Booby-trapping the Principal's platform to collapse.
Rigging the school bell to ring.
"... How do you explain these similarities? You tell me they call you the porcupine. With such a predilection for sadism and pranks, no wonder my dear .... you never had any friends. So why bring in this imaginary friend Black Pa Barroz?"
Seeking diversion, she takes his pipe as if to examine it.
"Oh, no. Don't try stealing a puff from my pipe there. It is only a dummy for visual effect. I have grown out such bad habits.... the likes of which you were caught doing by Sister Agnes, your warden".
Meanwhile in the conference hall, Theresa's dad Ron Madhav is attending a rancorous 'Meet the Press' called by the Public Relations Director, Goa.
Back to the hotel suite # 2003
Kovoor is now quizzing Theressa ... kind of a hypnosis, like what a psychiatrist does on a patient.
"There is no treasure there, my girl. No Black Pa Barroz either. Open and see ...”
A voice prompts Theresa. Within her mind, she is seen approaching a coffin - lying closed, in the center of the underground cellar. If not for the coffin, the cellar is empty. The shelves are devoid of treasured artifacts.
Theresa, eyes closed, stops short of opening the coffin - which, Kovoor wants her to look inside and thus be freed of her bouts of make-believe.
But Theresa opens her eyes with a jolt and says vehemently -
"How can I convince you? There is a treasure there and a ghost to guard the treasure!... I know it, I've seen it!"
She suddenly remembers something
"Ah, there you are...
Theresa takes out the missing pair of Isabelle's earring from her pocket - the one she picked up from Isabelle De'Gama's collection, and shows it to Kovoor. He stares at it, completely baffled.
Chapter 12.
At the security command, it's nothing but uproar and chaos. DIG Abida on phone, is answering shouts from the Home Secretary. Nearby, IG Rajat Singh is keeping composure as he gives advises over phone to the Public Relations Director. As per that advice, in the 'Meet the Press', Public Relations Director announces to all GIBO invitees that the conference is put on hold. A disgusted Cheng Ho - who had almost clinched the deal for his Macau Holdings, flies back to Shanghai in a huff. Amidst the eruption of arguments, Dr. Kovoor is seen entering the conference hall through a side door and silently pulling Theresa's dad, Ron Madhav, away from business ... towards more pressing domestic needs. Acrimony is continuing in the hall.
The hotel suite of Ron and Theresa.
On a coffee table lies the precious earring Theresa had discovered.
"She has found the De'Gama Treasure!"
That one statement from Ron Madhav sums up everything.
Theresa, sitting with her eyes closed in front of the earring, is at the receiving end of her father's benevolent, almost reverential, gaze. Kovoor, standing besides Ron, is non-pulsed. For Theresa, Kovoor's attitude don't matter. For, she has gained her dad's confidence.
With eyes still closed she says
"Listen, dad, I can show you the way to the treasure chamber..."
Meanwhile, taking her dad along to show him the treasure, Theresa tries to find the way down through the maze of caverns into the cellar. Without her map and without Barroz to help her, she loses her way. And to make matters worse, Ron Madhav falls down the stairs to fracture his knee. Leaving her injured dad on the stairs, seeking help, Theresa frantically runs down. Barely negotiating the caverns she manages to reach the central chamber. There is nobody there.
"Black Pa, Black Pa, where are you ... help, come and help my dad. He has hurt his leg".
Amidst wreckage of the recent battle she sees ... the coffin.
With great apprehension and terror she moves towards it. Opens, and finds her friend, old Barroz the ghost, lying inside - dying! Theresa watches in horror as Black Pa Barroz, before her very eyes, slowly disintegrates into dust. In the final labored gasps he tells her to forgo this treasure and to take her injured dad to the charity hospital, where Isabella - the orthopedic doctor, can mend him.
With a twinkle in his eyes before they finally close, Barroz says
"Go with your dad. You shall find the true treasure in life there ... I promise you".
Theresa tearfully kisses him, closes the coffin. As in a repeat performance, she also shuts the cellar doors... but unlike her ancestor Isabelle De'Gama.... she lights the fuse to the powder kegs! As she runs up the stairs we hear deafening blasts deep underground.
Chapter 13.
At the hospital when Dr. Isabella enters to treat Theresa's dad, it is uncertain as to who is the most surprised - Ron, Isabella or Theresa! The one person who is not wee bit surprised is Dr. Kovoor, who has accompanied Theresa to help her with her injured dad. It doesn't take long to realize that Isabella is Ron's estranged wife and the mother of Theresa. The situation seems right for a reunion. Dr. Kovoor tactfully calls Theresa outside - thus giving Ron and Isabella ample space to talk things over. Once outside, after shooing away the boy Chotta, Dr. Kovoor requests for the earring Theresa had found in the cellar. She gingerly hands it over.
"Careful Kovoor Sir, with Black Pa Barroz also gone, that is the only piece of 'my treasure' I am left with now".
…..
Epilogue.
Dr. Kovoor is entering the library to place the earring alongside its matching pair.
He is not surprised that the original one is missing.
'This one which Theresa had in her hand is not a new find. She had purloined the one that was here' - observes Dr. Kovoor. The Black Ghost Barroz was a figment of her imagination. The deprived child used her hallucinations as a means to attain her heart's desires'.
He replaces the earring in its glass case.
Dr. Kovoor viewing the security camera footage.
It is Theresa who does the entire booby trapping (a la film Home Alone) ... also, purloining the earring.
There is nobody else in the frame.
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WRITER'S NOTE -
There are three planes in the story narrative.
1. At the top surface plane, this story is about a young girl befriending 'a treasure guarding ghost' and both the rascals have a ball.
2. Below that there is the narrative with its logical explanation as to how the acts of the poltergeist happen.
The ghost character in this story is unreal - an illusion in Theresa's mind.
She tailors the situations according to the events/ characters she come across during the Investors' Meet happening in Goa.
3. At the bottom is the simplest, most realistic narrative.
There are only 5 real characters in this story - Ron, Theresa, Kovoor, Chotta Barroz & Isabella.
Ron (the entrepreneur) come to Goal has employed the services of Kovoor (the psychiatrist) to cure his daughter Theressa of her mental & behavioral problems for which she has been expelled from her Kodai residential school. Ron - who had in a custody battle won the sole-guardianship of his daughter, can't get to his estranged wife - Theresa's mother Isabella, a doctor in Goa, for any assistance in this issue of their daughter. The final solution to this evolves as Kovoor pushes Theresa to meet her mother and bring about a family reunion. Chotta Barroz is a welcome distraction for Theressa as the boy, with news about the casino and stories about the treasure, feeds her fertile fantasies.
Would-U - the voodoo doll, is a figment of Barroz's imagination as much as Black Pa Barroz is of Theresa's.


